Emma Currier

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In your monologue:

You have mms good eye contact with other characters on stage which made the scene more realistic. You had a good use of vocal skills ranging from different volumes to pace. This made your scene so much more emotional and you became so vulnerable as a performer and it made your characterisation so much better. I like your use of repeated gesture and I also think the pace of your monologue was very effective, causing the audience to stay engaged! (Millie)

So much emotion in everything and really purposeful movements made it really entertaining and interesting to watch. You sometimes lost projection when you got less angry, and there was also a loss of diction at times. You also closed your proxemics with Ana a bit too much which meant there was less left up to the imagination, so it was less tense and dramatic. Overall you did an excellent job, and yours was one of my personal favourites! (LM)

You spoke and moved with real meaning and your use of body and proxemics told the story on their own. (CL)

Your monologue was absolutely amazing! You used your vocal skills really smartly and changed tones throughout which made it really interesting to watch. Sometimes it was hard to hear exactly what word you were saying, so maybe try work on your diction but other than that, it was amazing! (ER)

Your monologue was incredible and the emotion you used was so amazing to watch! your control over your vocal skills is amazing but sometimes on the more quiet lines it was slightly hard to hear so maybe work on the projection on those lines but overall I loved it! ( MF )

Your monologue was so amazing and inspirational. Your use of vocal skills was fantastic, and your pace pitch and tone came together and helped build this character on stage. Maybe a bit too much screaming involved, I don’t know but this could have been worked out as slowly building tension other than going straight into the scream. I don’t know, just a thought. (RC)