Red Cuthbertson

Good varied use of dynamics and tone. (JM)

Great use of voice, and you clearly embraced the Shakespearean style. At some points the actual meaning of the words was lost. You also had some very clear movements. Great overall performance. (LM)

You were very confident on stage, I felt like you owned the stage and you adapted the character very well. Good use of gestures and tone. Projection was good in majority of the performance but there was some lines where it was hard to hear, understand. (NY)

EC:
You performed this monologue confidently and your gestures and posture were very effective. You used lots of vocal variety which made the performance very engaging. Your articulation and projection were very good, but ensure you hold energy for the entirety of the monologue :)

The intensity in your voice clearly presented the tone of the monologue, which you could really feel, although there wasn't much variation with it. Your use of the space was effective as it all seemed purposeful and your gestures further added to the intense tone of the performance. Just make sure to watch out for your held energy, the amount of times you released all your tension and let your arms hang made it hard to not notice. It's probably subconscious, which gives all the more reason to watch out for it! (SB)

You really portrayed this monologue beautifully. Your diction and tone were on point and you had a very loud and clear projection. Try make it a bit less static at times. Also really good connection with the audience!! well done :) (ER)