James Mackenzie

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Really good clear movement choices, and great embodiment of your character through both physicality and vocal control. At some points you tended to throw away the word at the end of a line, so try to focus on sustaining breath and projection throughout. Really great use of proxemics and levels throughout, and alround an enjoyable performance. (LM)

EC:

You embodied the character incredibly, and the youthful nature was really communicated. The range of proxemics were very effective and the variety in your vocal skills (volume, pace, pause, tone etc). All your movements and gestures had purpose.
Try to ensure you sustain articulation throughout the whole line, and make use of the whole studio space :)

Really good understanding of the character and the role that you are playing. Great projection and vocal control. I really liked how you connected with Red and the audience throughout the piece and your use of proxemics. There were a few movements that looked a bit uncertain so maybe try block the whole monologue, but other than that really great job!! (ER)

I loved how you used the space to really monody your character. I think your movement had thought and purpose behind it which was good. Your use of voice was effective and helped hugely with your characterisation. I think you could make sure to over pronounciate all your words to make sure they are clear. Possibly think about a shadow gesture?

There was a clear connection to the character and I felt you embodied him well. I also thought you used pause effectively and there was a good use of space and levels. Try to focus on your articulation when you lower your projection to help the words remain completely clear. You could also think about varying your tone of voice at times to keep the scene vocally interesting. Well done! (CC)