Sarah Mann Graefinghoff

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I liked the accent a lot, and the entire piece was fun and enjoyable to watch (LM)

Great use of movement and purpose

Good use of the space with clear purpose as to why your moving. The pace of dialogue could have been varied slightly. (JM)

I really enjoyed your accent and when you were performing it didn't take away from the overall monologue but I felt enhanced it.  I also felt your movements were very purposeful and really enjoyed how you interacted with Issa. (CVDB)

I really liked the characterisation in your monologue and I felt you brought a very nice energy on stage. I thought your use of vocal skills were effective as you had a nice tone, accent and varied intonation. You could try and work on your articulation just to keep the words clear at all times but otherwise I thought it was very good. Well done! (CC)

I loved the way you transferred the scene to the stage, it was very unique and enjoying to watch. I think you used space very well and your projection as well as your tone was effective. (NY)

Great monologue and you delivered it really well. You embodied your character very well. To improve i would suggest that you should work on your articulation. Overall you did an amazing job! (SU)