Ana Rita Ferronha Gunning

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Overall I loved your tone and how you used your dynamics in order to portray this obviously mentally ill crazy character. Also, I felt your comedic timing was perfect, and the way you delivered your lines really made me laugh all the way through. I wish in your performance you did more movement and broke away from just talking to Monica and Emma by talking to the audience. However, I really enjoyed your performance a lot. (CVDB)

EC:
Your facial expressions and variety of vocal skills worked very well to communicate the character and humour of the monologue. Make sure you consider the space and proxemics in order to make the piece less static :)

I really loved your performance and thought some of your choices were really smart. Your comedic timing was on point and i felt you made a connection with the character. You did feel a bit stuck throughout the piece and didn’t make much of a connection with the audience. Some of your gestures were on point and then sometimes they felt a bit too much. Also try working on your projection!! :) (ER)

I absolutely loved watching your performance, I thought the timing made it really funny along with the emphasis and tone on the comedic lines. The only thing was I thought was that it could be a bit static at moments and be more confident in your gestures but apart from that it was really good!

(MF)

I think your use of voice was really effective in your monologue. I think generally you had a lot of control and I think some of your timing was really good. I think you managed to embody the character well. Possibly think about your movement. Your repeated gestures and your use of space :)

(Millie w)

Your attitude and characterisation was very strong throughout you monologue. However you movement was very static and it felt very rooted. Also, you used the same gesture throughout the piece which became repetitive and soon lost purpose. Overall very good! -FG

Your delivery was very good. It enhanced the levels of comedy and reflection really effectively. You could have moved a bit more perhaps, to express your state of mind to the audience. (SMG)