Savanna Udall
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Great dynamic movements, the fluidity and momentum was really good too, however at some points it seemed slightly rushed so it was harder to appreciate some parts. Overall though you did an amazing job! (LM)
In your dance, I really like your use of extension. I think it I was very effective. You could have followed through the movements with more commitment and some areas had timing that needed to be just a little bit sharper, but I think your piece had a really beautiful quality and had good dynamics that made the movements very fluid. (Millie)
Your dance overall was such a nice idea and had such a good sense of movement. Your fluidity and the transitions were really thought out and smooth however there was one or two moments where they didn't. Your turns were very nice and whenever you did them the transition into and out of them was technically accurate. Another thing I would say is that in you dance you could tell you were hesitating. When you couldn't remember a move or didn't know what was next you facial expression would change and you could see panic on your face. Have confidence and don't hesitate cos the movement overall was very good. -FG