Cassandra Van Den Bosch
EC:
Your monologue was very intimate, largely thanks to your use of proxemics. Your posture and gestures worked well with the character and your articulation and projection were good.
You could have maybe tried to explore some more vocal variation (pitch, resonance areas etc.)
This was a really great monologue! Your connection with the audience was amazing and it felt really intimate and close. As an audience member you felt the emotions of your monologue. Try to increase your projection and maybe change the tone and pitch a bit more! (ER)
I really enjoyed your monologue!! I think your tone was perfect for it and you could tell you understood the context of the piece! Try to work on your projection a bit more but apart from that I loved it! (MF)
Throughout the monologue I think you had a really good connection to the character and you embodied her well, I think this was particularity due to your use of tone and gesture. I also throughout you used the space well and I liked the more intimate proxemics to create a connection between you character and the audience. The projection was mostly good but could still be improved slightly. I felt the pauses were often very effective but maybe try and run through some of the lines without these pauses and see if that gives the line a slightly different effect and just varies your vocals a bit more. Well done! (CC)