PEER TO PEER FEEDBACK

Good articulation and use of varied dynamic. Try to move with a purpose and motive rather than just moving to use the space. (JM)

EC:
You evidently showed a clear understanding of the character, and your vocal variety made this a highly engaging and entertaining monologue. Ensure you focus on articulating every word said. 

It was a huge improvement from the rehearsal process! Your use of the space was incredibly smooth and purposeful and really showed how agitated your character was. You really showed the build up of your characters rising emotions through your use of varied tones and pauses, and more simply through the dynamics in your volume and pace. The gestures you used were nice but they could have been more purposeful as it seemed like they were there more as filler rather than emphatic (not that they didn't come across that way). There were also times where your pace was so fast that the articulation of the words suffered and it was hard to catch all the words. But overall I was very impressed. (SB)

I think you embodied your character well and have deliberate motivated movements most of the time. There were a few moments where you seems unsure but I think overall it was really effective. I think you had good projection, just remember to over articulate in some places.  think about shadow gestures? I’m not sure if you had one and I didn’t see it but either I spouse you might need to make it obvious 

(Millie w)